well hare are your 4.8 stars i honestly like your novel its a romance fantasy novel with a one of a kind feel to i i dont know how to explain but i havent seen any grammar mistakes so far but well i probebly just read them and my brain automaticly kinda translates it to a proper sentence with the help of the previus sentences and stuff so far no major grammar **** ups 5stars there. and 5stars fore uploads cuase its been rel,y stable when i started easing it once per day i think it was but itsa great. i like the speed of the story pregressing and you dont reapet on the old things like i the princess flirting with her you somehow keep it diffrent with each chapter with its own feel if it had 500 chapter i euild probebly read them all and still have the same felling as long as your creativity works its magical words in the novel 5stars. 5stars on charechters it just has a nice feel to it. 4 stars on world background cuz we im pretty sure you havent mentoind the name of some stuff i just feel its lacking but no need to fix this issue it dosent ruien the plot so keep up the good work 4stars hare. pn chapter 75
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