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Huntsman
HuntsmanLv24yr
2020-11-07 13:26

Gotta be honest man, nobody cares about the BT part of the story. When we read novels, fanfics,...etc. what we care about is character and story development, a few past chapters to explain certain details are fine, but jumping between the past and the present constantly breaks the flow of the story. I mean, why in the living sh*t should I care about Gwen Stacy? We all know he left her behind, she doesn't contribute anything to the story, Peter Parker too. What's point of having them? Nothing. They don't change the character in anyway, and any excitement about possible power-ups in those BT is completely snuffed because we all know what powers his present self has. It's not a good way to keep readers interested.

Swallowing The Spider

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LPummill3
LPummill3Lv14

I honestly did not expect much from the fanfic but boy was i not expecting it to be so good. When i first learned that every other chapter was when he was in marvel then to dc i was expecting to not understand anthing but it was actually really easy to. I really recommend this story.

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GreedAF
GreedAFLv5

dude this AT,BT **** is really annoying, it's just irritating and doesn't really make sense, you could do your Marvel arc then go to DC instead of jumping between. you might think this is a Unique and whatnot idea but Unique doesn't mean good

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iOnlyEatDinner
iOnlyEatDinnerLv5

Reveal spoiler

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ProProcrastination
ProProcrastinationLv4

Story is confusing and has a lot of plot holes. Despite the same character being different diensions/times, the character development makes no sense. Unless you already have written all of the plots for marvel, the character developments, his thoughts etc, the DC character makes no sense. Simply having the DC character react in a certain way based on a development in the marvel past we just read about is not how realistic. I have tried reading just the marvel and DC aspects seperately however it still does not flow. Dont want to even get into the whole intelligence thing.... I think their could be potential in the style of writing, however their is no sense of time difference between the marvel timeline MC and the MC DC timeline. Maybe if the marvel side was planned out thoroughly or wrItten beforehand it could work.

4yr
Lorelynf
LorelynfLv6

beta mc. 1-3chapter and im done

4yr
Everything_Forever
Everything_ForeverLv14

MC is a stupid simp. Terrible novel.

4yr
Niko91
Niko91Lv5

He has training and superpowers gets easily handle by a tief ......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

4yr
Ashmodai
AshmodaiLv4

That jumping around with the chapters is just shit and annoying. .

4yr
Pons
PonsLv6

Story is confusing as f.and it doesent even on an liner path and when we jump to the future we already knwo what up but he still reapt the experience in both timeline.And the SIMPS not simp because he got the power of Million simp in him.

4yr
Hydrogen8
Hydrogen8Lv5

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