Yeah I like it It have potentials if grown in right direction. I know he is criminal but he is not someone bad ?? He just did that for his sister Also if he can get something for whoever he ate, that mean he would get powers of some young noble devils. Like Pillar abilities. Waiting for future chapters to know more about the book, can't give a real judge when character of mc is still mysterious and pretty much everything about him.

Thanks for begin. .

The story is good has potential and the development is just nice some wrong information about the world but what to say this is a fanfic the author can do whatever he wants. And Thanks For The Hard Work Author 👍❤️.

Pretty good story. The author has good grammar and a good imagination. I recommend this story if you have free time and want something short but good.

I like it, I think it’s good to have these crossover fan fictions so there are more variables and timelines but also new ideas of what could have happened so 9/10 in general so far.