A surprisingly unique approach to monster reincarnation (not that I've read tons of them). The writing quality is superb, each scene is vividly described, painting very clear pictures of whats happening. The few characters so far have actual personalities, making the dialogue pretty freshing. Enough of the world and progression has been shown that I'm confident the story will only get better (sorry for pressure author <3). Main issues come down to update stability and pacing. I wish author posted more chapters, but as a slow writer myself I can only wait patiently lol. As for pacing, it in part suffers due to the update rate, but also that many plotpoints are opened without previous ones being closed. Overall, the issues aren't too blaring and the good points are really shine, especially the descriptions. Highly recommended.
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LIKEEternalNightLotus:Thank you so much for the review!! I'm definitely taking your tips going forward and i'll close all those open ends. ...I'll also work on posting more (no pressure) :D