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OliveBreeze
OliveBreezeLv23yr
2021-02-11 03:06

I’ve read through most of the available and all I can say is its kinda addictive. I love dynamic between Aurelia and Sensei, but I really hate him. He’s super sus and fishy but i guess she needs him as the villian to explore her “good” side. The pacing may seem slow but the details in the story telling are first rate. The author doesn’t spoon feed everything to you like in some books and he ets you figure stuff out with just enough mystery to keep you interested without being too overbearing. I cant wait to see more of the nestlings and the other reincarnated classmates too. Something tells me Sensei is just as much of an asshole to them as he is to her

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EternalNightLotus
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Thanks for the review. I really appreciate it!

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LightNight
LightNightLv14

While I have already created one review for this novel I think I want to go into more detail about my thoughts. Writing Quality: This book has basically zero spelling/grammar mistakes and is fun to read if you like fantasy and magic! 4.5/5 Update Stability: I gave this segemnt three stars as sometimes the author can go awhile without updating but I can’t really jude because every author has their own writing speed. 3/5 Story Development: The story isn’t that fast but at the same tine isn’t to slow. It takes time to flesh out characters and the world that they reside in. 4.8/5 Character Design/Development: If there’s anything in this novel that really catches my eye it’s the character design and development, each character has something to add to the story and each one has their own thoughts and feelings. Some are loyal and honarable and some are mischievous and scheming it has a wonderfull array of different characters and yet they arent so confusing that you loose track! Overall this is an excellent part of thr story. 5/5 World Background: The book gives us a great deal of knowledge of the world of Aeon but but dosen’t drop so much on us that we forget half of it the next chapter. Also the world has plenty of mysteries that we have yet to discover or explore! It gives us knowledge in an easy to comprehend way. Overall 4.8/5 Final thoughts: This book is great and here are some things to expect, The MC is not a genius and does not have a billion iq and is slowly learning about the world around it. The characters are impeccable and I could rants about joe good they are for a long time! Honestly this is probably one of the best books I’ve ever read, virtual and on paper. I will always read this book. I highly recommend! Overall I rate this book a 4.9/5

EternalNightLotus
EternalNightLotusAuthor

Author review 2.0 because everyone seems to be doing one and I thought I'd join in! Things to expect from this story... 1. No OP mc that never faces any problems. I will add that Aurelia is very flawed and some of her decisions will make you shake your head. 2. An mc that acts her age. She's young and it shows! She makes mistakes and as hilarious as they may seem, she does learn from them...or at least she tries to. Wrong things she does at one point, do come back to bite her in the butt. But that doesn't mean she'll keep making mistakes, she's not dumb. She's just learning. 3. Friendship among characters that could be considered enemies or rivals. And yes this includes some reincarnates. Not every character other than the MC is an antagonist. They may have been at one point but Aurelia acknowledges people make mistakes, and she might decide to forgive them - even those that don't deserve it. Or kill them, depending on her mood. 4. Suspicious, sometimes paranoid MC. No Mc that know everything because they reincarnated and have two brains. This mc does not rely on plot armour, so expect lots of questions to be asked about things she encounters because she likes to know...stuff. 5. Characters that have agendas outside the mc. Not every character revolves around her, they may be close but have completely different motives than she does. Some evil/scheming characters are to be expected. 5. Character development for everyone, not just the mc. Side characters will have their own backstories and you will see them changing overtime for better or for worse. Even the mc changes! 6. Romance! Much much much later on in the story, but expect it to be confusing and full of surprises. 7. Slightly slow paced story. Its not slow to the point of crawling, but the first few chapters aren't super fast either because I was focused on establishing a character. 8. Decent writing. I'm not saying it's 100% perfect, you'll get the occasional typo when I proofread too quickly, but I always go back and fix them. Expect some descriptive portions (I like using words to paint scary pictures). But other than that, its alright compared to WN standards...I think. Generally chapters should be between 1500 to 2000 words, some chapters just end up being longer than I expect 🙃

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