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aguy
aguyLv123yraguy

Good story, terrible synopsis. A few early MC decision "flaws" are explained over the story which shows a good bit of planning and character consistency, but webnovel readers tend towards low patience, so it could maybe do with a bit more explanation of protagonist thought process for some decision making moments. For those wanting a better synopsis, see below: After a string of bad luck and persecution from corrupt mobsters, John had little left apart from his life and he was about to lose even that. So when he got the option to join the Mission Worlds, he chose "yes." Now a powerful pyromancer he knows he can get his revenge. The new question is can he survive his new lifestyle? And how can he rescue his parents? Anything is possible in the Mission Worlds. You just have to be strong enough to take it. Includes: system, power growth, somewhat OP MC, clever MC (but not-socially-robotic), empire building.

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I'm Invincible Now?

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LaughingSalt
LaughingSaltAuthorLaughingSalt

Thanks for the advice =)

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By "somewhat op" wdym

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By "somewhat op" wdym

Skiterz
SkiterzLv5Skiterz

an example: first world he visits the average combatant will have the strength of like 10 while he has 20. Second world he visits people have strength of 1000 he has has more etc, just that he starts out strong in every world. though i kind exactly say how much stronger because we are just entering the second world.

_fantasy_reader_:By "somewhat op" wdym
daoist_KoOlAiD
daoist_KoOlAiDLv13daoist_KoOlAiD

new question...wdym by empire building??

Skiterz:an example: first world he visits the average combatant will have the strength of like 10 while he has 20. Second world he visits people have strength of 1000 he has has more etc, just that he starts out strong in every world. though i kind exactly say how much stronger because we are just entering the second world.
Crycks
CrycksLv14Crycks

Agree with you, im someone who dont like to read story when the synopsis is of low quality. My brain is like « if the author cant even put some effort on something like 10 line, do you really believe that he will take the patience to write 50 more well build chapters? Dont lose your time here » So here i am, trying to tell myself that it can be a good story.

teja_tej
teja_tejLv2teja_tej

Nah... I think the synopsis was interesting enough... Have seen too many of the kind you wrote..

Daoist824089
Daoist824089Lv4Daoist824089

well ... to answer your question basically mc becomes the emperor. not in a sense of being a tyrannt, but a nice one who tries to save the world.

daoist_KoOlAiD:new question...wdym by empire building??