Review Detail of TBS_23 in The Gamer's System

Item: The Gamer's System
Rating: 4.8

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TBS_23Lv133yrTBS_23

Novel is interesting... An MC who good with plans & sticks with his fighting style... Villians with their own unique personaloties & reasons for their actions... The only time the flow of the novel suffered was when the author tried to be mysterious about Zeke when we knew it was him... We could guess how & whose body he used to comeback to life... Those few chapters took me over a month to read because it destroyed the flow of the novel... Just about to finish that part hopefully it gets good again...

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Campoccino

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TBS_23Lv13TBS_23

It worked with Glade but not with Zeke... His mystery & why he is being referred to as "The man” did not work... The mystery lacked substance & frlt forced... It almost ruined a good novel...

3yr

CampoccinoAuthorCampoccino

Thank you for the honest review sir. I'll work to improve on the next updates based on this.😁

TBS_23:It worked with Glade but not with Zeke... His mystery & why he is being referred to as "The man” did not work... The mystery lacked substance & frlt forced... It almost ruined a good novel...

3yr