Review Detail of interven in When a Reader Ascends

. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . the story develops very quickly, so the character development is weak. grammar and logic errors are also high . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .