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Sorry bud but i feel like this is not a good representation if the Douluo Dalu world at all and is just a typical cultivation world with the cultivation system of douluo dalu. Unexplained power use, the mc and his mother somehow randomly learn how to fight without any type of training involved nor are they over spirit level 10. All enemies doesn’t even have any brain, a typical young master, their parents who are city lords (not sure how they became that if they are like that). You left so many plot holes that it literally hurts to just think. What happened to the mistress of Yuhao’s father and his father’s reaction? There was even a period where you just copypasted from slime tensei and just changed the names! Also, (Don’t read any further if you get triggered by my opinion on ******): Wtf is with people in the comment section? Almost all of them want to see ****** between Yuhao and his mom, which is in my opinion something really disgusting. I wonder how many of these 14 years olds (cause 9 years old usually don’t get horny) would love to have sexual intercourse with their own mother. I happen upon 15 comments on a single line with All 15 people asking for ******. in my opinion and as a son, i would love to see them all burn in hell. Harem is one thing in novels that i mostly can’t bear if the novel have characters without brain but ****** is just something i can’t bear at all. Go die in a fire all of you disgusting fuc*s
My Power is Upgrading Everything
Nine_Clouds
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Well, you see, I was just an ******* writer who write story for fun! I appreciate your review. First, I write it with my own idea and I don't just copy-paste it from Rimuru and Veldora's conversation, I using their conversation as a reference! and you can see it when I using professor oak reference as well in that chapter. (Note: I watch the pokemon jokes in the Youtube, Pokemon parody | "If Parents became Pokémon Trainers'') Second, They passively know how to fight! because of their legacies, It's not that just become an expert, they just know how to fight... If Yuhao fighting Tang San right now he will still be the one who loses cause Tang san has more experience! (Note: Well The system is basically an Upgrading System! So if Huo Yuhao keeps upgrading...) Well, I left so many plot holes because I write when I have an idea!, as for Duke white tiger and his so-called Misstress, I don't have time to write the chapter. As for the Young master clan! if you already reach ch.26 then you will understand at least why his mother and father like that. Third, The ******! well, ehem... For the second time, I appreciate your review. P.S PEACE!
Nine_Clouds:Well, you see, I was just an ******* writer who write story for fun! I appreciate your review. First, I write it with my own idea and I don't just copy-paste it from Rimuru and Veldora's conversation, I using their conversation as a reference! and you can see it when I using professor oak reference as well in that chapter. (Note: I watch the pokemon jokes in the Youtube, Pokemon parody | "If Parents became Pokémon Trainers'') Second, They passively know how to fight! because of their legacies, It's not that just become an expert, they just know how to fight... If Yuhao fighting Tang San right now he will still be the one who loses cause Tang san has more experience! (Note: Well The system is basically an Upgrading System! So if Huo Yuhao keeps upgrading...) Well, I left so many plot holes because I write when I have an idea!, as for Duke white tiger and his so-called Misstress, I don't have time to write the chapter. As for the Young master clan! if you already reach ch.26 then you will understand at least why his mother and father like that. Third, The ******! well, ehem... For the second time, I appreciate your review. P.S PEACE!
I see i see. References are nice to quote when you use them but not so much when others have no clue what they means (i cri every time one of my jojo references gets ignored). Anyways, the main thing that confuses me is yuhao and his mom getting stronger with no training whatsoever. i get that the system’s op and all, but personally, i like to read stories that have a lot of touch with reality. It’s a good story, I’ll tell ya that! But the main problem is the typical young master and parents that are powerful but the whole family has no brain whatsoever part. I tend to look deeply into things, when i read the part where the parent appear and acted, i had a really interesting question. How the fk did these two incompetent people became city lords and how isn’t the city in ruins yet? I mean, i do have an answer but I probably take up too much of your time already lol
Nine_Clouds:Well, you see, I was just an ******* writer who write story for fun! I appreciate your review. First, I write it with my own idea and I don't just copy-paste it from Rimuru and Veldora's conversation, I using their conversation as a reference! and you can see it when I using professor oak reference as well in that chapter. (Note: I watch the pokemon jokes in the Youtube, Pokemon parody | "If Parents became Pokémon Trainers'') Second, They passively know how to fight! because of their legacies, It's not that just become an expert, they just know how to fight... If Yuhao fighting Tang San right now he will still be the one who loses cause Tang san has more experience! (Note: Well The system is basically an Upgrading System! So if Huo Yuhao keeps upgrading...) Well, I left so many plot holes because I write when I have an idea!, as for Duke white tiger and his so-called Misstress, I don't have time to write the chapter. As for the Young master clan! if you already reach ch.26 then you will understand at least why his mother and father like that. Third, The ******! well, ehem... For the second time, I appreciate your review. P.S PEACE!
Well is there ****** or not? Such things have to made clear with comments even if you spoil it in a way (well it could be an ooc half-sister so) many people will feel conflicted about it. I personally don't mind either but others care. So does he get ra.ped by his mom or not?
Nine_Clouds:Well, you see, I was just an ******* writer who write story for fun! I appreciate your review. First, I write it with my own idea and I don't just copy-paste it from Rimuru and Veldora's conversation, I using their conversation as a reference! and you can see it when I using professor oak reference as well in that chapter. (Note: I watch the pokemon jokes in the Youtube, Pokemon parody | "If Parents became Pokémon Trainers'') Second, They passively know how to fight! because of their legacies, It's not that just become an expert, they just know how to fight... If Yuhao fighting Tang San right now he will still be the one who loses cause Tang san has more experience! (Note: Well The system is basically an Upgrading System! So if Huo Yuhao keeps upgrading...) Well, I left so many plot holes because I write when I have an idea!, as for Duke white tiger and his so-called Misstress, I don't have time to write the chapter. As for the Young master clan! if you already reach ch.26 then you will understand at least why his mother and father like that. Third, The ******! well, ehem... For the second time, I appreciate your review. P.S PEACE!