Story is good... dont read the comment till you finish reading since it might affect you experience. Kinda like someone keep telling you potato chip is bad and doesn't tasted good...!!!

The story is good,it has a nice Character development, good mc and system. The only thing lacking is the grammar but it is still passable...

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the synopsis gave me the feeling of a mc with a negative iq or a child of a chinese novel, where he wants to prove himself to be the best for everything and everyone for no "apparent reason". it looks like the synopsis of a child who wants to show himself better than the other in everything

i will give 5 star for the incest..... thanks sensei --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Lanjuuuuut bro Semangat terus ...... keep update your fic Good luck 👍🏻 👍🏻💪🏻✌🏻👍🏻💪🏻✌🏻👍🏻✌🏻🦁✌🏻👍🏻✌🏻💪🏻✌🏻👍🏻💪🏻✌🏻👍🏻💪🏻✌🏻

Great fanfiction novel pls keep on going👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

For me this novel is good, I can see author improvement in this story. I very aware that not all story is perfect... but even though the novel is still lacking at few aspect, I still give author 5 stars