Firstly, I only made it to chapter 5. I Must say that you did well on writing this fic, but. It wasn't for me, for starter's, it was Very very uncharacteristic for Ainz to do most of the things he did on the chapters that I have seen so far. And as far as I know Ainz is a Very Very cautious person bordering paranoia. So yeah that's that. Secondly, the way he thinks and interact. that's what bothers me the most, as you have said in the early chapter that he has "Conquered" the new world. But he Acts as if he hadn't Conquered anything before, like he doesn't show the Overlord like ruler he is. instead he has this disconnect with his Overlord self, and from what I have read on the LN of Overlord, he has Fully accepted his Overlord self. And mind you he hasn't even completed his Conquest in the new world, but he already accepted his human self and his Overlord self. but in this fic it's a mess when you compare it to the current Ainz of the LN and this fic Ainz. thirdly, I just genuinely dislike the way you're portraying him as a Subservient of sort in this Fic. I just don't ever see Ainz going that low. btw I think I've seen this fic before in Fanfiction. don't know why I get the feeling like I've read it before, anyways it was a good run for me, sadly it's just not for me. I hope this Review doesn't offend you in any way, if it do I apologise. have a nice day ^^/
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