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Immortal_Lover
Immortal_LoverLv44yr
2020-10-04 01:29

I hope the author study more about the powers of the mc. I'm still at early chapter but the development is very very poor. It makes my IQ so low. I hope it will improve soon. you nerfing him TOO MUCH doesn't make sense at all. I'm okay with the stamina part but the observation haki, ew. Enel literally covered the whole sky island with his haki after he ate the devil fruit. And I believe he didn't even train that much in it at all. The ftg part, I don't know how did you got the idea to add that. If you didn't know the meaning of putting a mark at a specific target, then I just wish you didn't include the ftg at all. That's all. I hope the story gets better as the chapters goes on. And please no more nerfing as it is really a major turn off to majority of the reader. If you are nerfing him, I hope you give us an acceptable reason/s. Have a nice day!

In world of One Piece

Rabin_Subedi
4.0
107 Chs

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Immortal_Lover
Immortal_LoverLv4

and also I wish you didn't choose ftg as the other gift. when the mc has the strong power enough to control his df, he can literally cloud riding at the sky. he can literally go wherever he wants. don't understimate the speed of lightning. I just wish you choose more powerful and more 'practical' skill other than the ftg

4yr
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NewGoldie
NewGoldieLv14

The MC get Nerfed then buffs then Nerfed again, the inconsistent power that MC have is kinda SHitTy. Atless you got one consistent about the MC that's his power and personality "Bland ".

4yr

CxD18
CxD18Lv3

Mc gets flying thunder God and lighting logia fruit as powers. And what does author do, directly nerf him. Like ever heard of flying thunder God jutsu with a distance limit of 5 m and only usable once an hour. A logia user spends half an hour dodging a tiger without haki. I mean come on logia user have all attacks pass through them without haki.

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amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

MC is neutered as ****..he has flying raijin and lightening DF but author neuters him so much, plus MC is bland, there not personality to him......................... Author, u shouldnt neuter him, I suggest rewrite cause as this is, its bad,

4yr
Imperial_Fox
Imperial_FoxLv5

Author nerfed the **** out of MC, he is supposed to be lightning man with flying thunder God, and still can't travel 1/100 the speed of lightning, even more that author doesn't consider Devil fruit's abilities, he trained for like a year and still only knows how to throw lightning bolts thatt only burns trees, and there was enel, who could literally vaporise island using it without training. Flying thunder God was neutered so much that it is actually better to not use it in battle as it is '''stamina consuming'''. And he doesn't even receives a observation boost of lightning DF like Enel, I feel that enel might be a better DF user than MC.

4yr
LordofMountains
LordofMountainsLv3

trash novel and the author seems he doesn't know anything about physics and one-piece retard mc and in the middle, it will turn into harem to cover his poor writing and creativity as usual

4yr
Matthew_Morrison
Matthew_MorrisonLv1

This is the most boring **** I ever read it is basically wish fulfillment with my killing everyone except Luffy family and crew. Also the writing quality is beyond **** it even surprised me.

4yr
Frostbaba
FrostbabaLv13

Plot is right up my alley keep it up author kun🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Carefree_Sensei
Carefree_SenseiLv14

I'm a drunk I'm a troll troll troll troll troll troll troll tralalala Trololo tralalalala Joe lalalalala troll la la la la la la la la love hahaha hahaha

4yr
Rabin_Subedi
Rabin_SubediAuthor

Well, I am the author of this Fanfic so I will give it five stars. Please do read my fanfic this is my first time writing so please be lenient on me.

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