Review Detail of LinYang in The CEO's Son is a Serial Killer

Not bad at all. The quality is much higher than some of the other works I have seen on here. The writing quality is decent, although some parts feel a bit awkward, and there were definitely some spots I would throw in a comma. There were no spelling mistakes that I saw. The story's premise and characters are both interesting, and I'm looking forward to seeing how both the story and the author grows.