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It's a very nice read, a decently paced story with good development both for the plot and characters, you did a really good job telling the story in the first point of view, very nicely described details. However if there's one thing I say it falls short at it'd be the dialogue and your MC experiencing the world around her, it's just a minor point, but I think you could use more interval actions and descriptions between the sentences of each dialogue to make them sound more "alive" sort to speak, the narrative have the same flaw, it feel like you're telling the readers what's going on and what to feel rather than showing them the MC experience. However like I said, I still really enjoy it, love your writing style, I wish to read more from you