Review Detail of No_name_4460 in Death... and me

author use sentence and words: that being said, obivously, However, way way to much. The explanation that roan is capable of pretty much everything related to combat just because he was death is illogical since his job was only to send them to path of reincarnation, all characters have same reaction, talk same way, the bast point in story (destruction of planet) is ruined since author didnt bother to show how that affect their relationship,mentality etc at least not nearly enough. There are to many unnessery explanation which make a reading annoying, english is gradually becoming worse. The premise of story itself is pretty good and intresting unfortunaly its poorly done