Review Detail of Gre_y in Death... and me

I hope you recover fast Suiyan. Hopefully this heartfelt review from me speeds it up hehe. **SPOILERS*** Writing Quality: 5/5. Nothing wrong that I can say about Suiyan's writing. One of the few authors on Webnovel that can actually write in proper English. I have gotten to the latest chapter and I have not spotted any grammatical or even if there was it hasn't distracted me :). Stability of Updates: 5/5. Used to be 3 a day until heath issues (´Oƪ). Now 2 a day but hey, I'm not complaining (maybe just a little). I can't believe you can still keep up with the daily chapters, you have my respect! Story Development: 4/5 I enjoyed following the Twins using their brains to outplay and outsmart some of the oldest cultivators. The plot twist that was around 30% of the novel's current length was rather interesting, it was original. The system helps but during some dangerous situations it's not that useful which is something I like. Romance, let's talk about this 'thing' that forced me to dock of point. I'm not hating on people who enjoy romance but I just didn't see Roan falling in love you know? I can see Rean falling in love, but also not. I would've rather liked to see just an action fantasy novel and also because you don't even get to see the girls 75% of the time ._. Character Design: 4/5. I have to give a round of applause to Suiyan for the creation of 'SISTER ORB'! I fucking love her (my opinion), I fell in love with her in the earlier chapters, she was so funny. Roan and Rean are also my favorite duo as well. Not sure if it was intentional but the black and white colors like Yin and Yang, but those 2 sure balance each other out xD. I had to also dock of a star because of Roan and Rean's girls!!!! Half from those 2 and another half from thief lady who's also the mother of that clingy girl (I despise those 2). Hopefully they never appear in the book again >:(. World Background: 5/5. Phew, we're finally at the good part. Some people think that destroying their birth planet was a bad idea but I think it was a good idea. It adds more detail to the plot since how else would Suiyan add the 'Foundation Orbs' (or was it crystals?). The first planet built on a little bit of the backstory of the system, the second planet just added more to that. We also got to see the appearance of a demon and the Realm of Gods. What I like about the current arc was the power near the center and the added effect that reincarnation brings. Sorry if I'm a bit biased, but I couldn't put some of things I wanted to say in words so this will have to do. Suiyan I hope you get better soon :).