Review Detail of MadAuthor in Death... and me
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it starts of pretty interesting, i like the idea a lot,but thats pretty much it,only the idea and a the beginning chapters are good(like a certain game cp cough 77) the rest are boring,cultivation system is your typical Chinese style nothing new so i didn't even care i just use number instead you know because there is absolutely no importance on the name(exactly opposite of the lordofmysteries when the name of the sequence is important),i have a suggestion my dear friend,instead of coming up with bullshit such as forming cores building pillars or whatever the **** that i as a moooooortaaaaal can not relate and understand,come up with shit that i can relate (again in lordofmysteries i can totally relate to the power system for example for the clown, i have been in countless situations that i was completely hopeless but had to smile,so i understand the power system) in one word ,your power system is cliche and completely lack originality,but if it was just the cultivation system i could still accept the book,but the problem is the system is not the only problem,the mcs are boring as hell(some times and i mean it sometimes their instructions are interesting),side characters are boring and without much of a impact on the plot,plot is bullshit(why are they not allowed to know the reason why the world got split????there is absolutely know reason,i cannot relate to that , i give an example, in lordofmysteries,due to threat of madness,most of the mysteries knowledge had to be kept secret,so i understand and accept, but what heck is the reason for them no be kept in the dark about the whole situation,the only thing that i can think of is that a the writer is a complete imbecile and cannot come up with a suitable reason,)there is no goal for mcs(there is goal but again they just has the goal of saving the world or them selves,there ia no short term goals that would come together and lead to a huge change in the story),the world building is your typical bullshit you see in most of Chinese novel,(again go and see the lordofmysteries) overall the book is a complete waste of time (the reason that i am harsh on you is your arrogance in saying (reeeead the fiiiiisrt chaaaapter,i am thaaaaaat confident), even the jkrooling would be this arrogant
Death... and me
Suiyan
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I'm gonna be honest, I had this novel in my mind for a long time and the only reason I didn't read it was because of the synopsis. When I eventually tried it out, the only reason I didn't force myself to read through the boring parts (aka normal cultivation system) was because of my memories of the synopsis. So yeah...
I agree with the issue of the synopsis. It is arrogant and bad, done. As for the other points, I like the characters, both mains and sides, especially the two mc's and their strange brotherly bond, which I can say from having a brother myself to be somewhat true to life, not the 10 billion-year-old grim reaper. Yes, some are a little cliche but they all seem to be thinking, which is a good thing, now on the power system. It is a cultivation novel, so levelling up is gonna be the same old same old. The elemental affinities are relatively standard but, in my opinion, not done horribly. For the knowledge side of things and telling the MC's information, you referred to another novel, saying that they didn't know this because I assume it is revealed later. When it comes to the goal of the novel, it is clearly playing the long game. The sky above the sky, so to speak, so I think we should treat it as a slow burn when it comes to main plots. But something I do like about this novel the writer is BOLD.
have you read Lord of mysteries or reverend insanity?? they are Good novels this one as best can be qualified as junk food novel
Malthemute:I agree with the issue of the synopsis. It is arrogant and bad, done. As for the other points, I like the characters, both mains and sides, especially the two mc's and their strange brotherly bond, which I can say from having a brother myself to be somewhat true to life, not the 10 billion-year-old grim reaper. Yes, some are a little cliche but they all seem to be thinking, which is a good thing, now on the power system. It is a cultivation novel, so levelling up is gonna be the same old same old. The elemental affinities are relatively standard but, in my opinion, not done horribly. For the knowledge side of things and telling the MC's information, you referred to another novel, saying that they didn't know this because I assume it is revealed later. When it comes to the goal of the novel, it is clearly playing the long game. The sky above the sky, so to speak, so I think we should treat it as a slow burn when it comes to main plots. But something I do like about this novel the writer is BOLD.
Lord of Mysteries I haven't but I have read a decent chunk of Reverend Insanity and I must say it's very good, but it has its flaws for example the story pulls a Deus ex cicada twice in two arcs almost back to back for an example.
MadAuthor:have you read Lord of mysteries or reverend insanity?? they are Good novels this one as best can be qualified as junk food novel
Malthemute:Lord of Mysteries I haven't but I have read a decent chunk of Reverend Insanity and I must say it's very good, but it has its flaws for example the story pulls a Deus ex cicada twice in two arcs almost back to back for an example.