Review Detail of Elesmere in Shadow

Item: Shadow
Rating: 4.8

Review detail

ElesmereLv23yrElesmere

This story was lit. The start was strong and also the author got a good sense of words. I recommend this story because it is intriguing. It also flows at a steady pace. However, there is one thing. Sometimes, I was confused because many first sentence starts not with a name, making me a bit confused.

Shadow

GloriouslyFamous

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GloriouslyFamousAuthorGloriouslyFamous

Thank you for informing me! I will look into it and ASAP will try to fix it to improve readability :)

3yr

GloriouslyFamousAuthorGloriouslyFamous

Thank you for pointing out the exact location of the problem. Unfortunately, your paragraph comment disappeared after I fixed the error.

GloriouslyFamous:Thank you for informing me! I will look into it and ASAP will try to fix it to improve readability :)

3yr