Review Detail of ViniRedShadow in In Marvel with the powers of Accelerator

The story itself is not bad, the MC is fine, his powers are built well, his personality is a bit, how should I say it, too well formed for a person in his situation, but it seems like it will be explained further into the plot. The background is fine, it's the X-men, but with some not so cliche characters, at least until the chapter I could bear to read... Story development I honestly don't know, the grammar is really bad, so bad that I couldn't make sense of the plot because I had to make corrections and analyze each paragraph in my head to make some sense of it, for me at least reading this novel became a chore more than an enjoyment. The story per se is not bad, it's just that I can't read it. If in the future you edited the chapters I could give it another try... till than, good luck.