Very good. The story line is good. The personality of the main character is just right, he is not stupid and he follows everything that others want, he is not naive, he apparently has a position / idea of what he wants and what to do to achieve it. At first, he doesn't care about getting his hands dirty, but he also doesn't want to go out and kill just because he looked ugly. About the possible love interest, I can't say much at the beginning, but it is different from the regular relative of other stories, it has personality, it is interesting at least. The plot is great so far. I will not go into the question of writing, because there is always something here and there, like any other. Congratulations you have a great story built here, and I hope more and more chapters.
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