Review Detail of LinShui in Monarch of the Darkness

This story, 'Monarch of Darkness' has quite an intriguing plot. So far, we have seen how Hayden has adapted to his surroundings, gained some skills and how he utilises them in battle. I personally like how the asian cultivation theme is westernised in this novel, it gives it a touch of something new and makes it more surprising and unpredictable for the reader. The story itself is well paced and has a nice flow to it. Although, with a little editing and proofreading, the story could be even more immersive and seamless to the reader. The characters are shown well, but I personally would love more description on the surroundings and the world, since it is a new world for both us the readers and the main character as well. All in all, the story and the plot has promise, it has an interesting premise and the author explains quite fluidly how everything works during the first few chapters. I'm curious how the characters will evolve as the story progresses. Keep up the good job, author! :D