Review Detail of Gourmet_DAO in Monarch of the Darkness
Review detail
I read 8 chapters at a time. Read was interesting! The text block is written wonderfully, there are intriguing points. The world is fully revealed. But the character is not completely clear what he thinks about, what emotions accompany him, his inner world, his philosophy ?! Well, probably this is only chapter 8, we learn about his world from other chapters. So this is not a problem. I liked that his magical skills are well and clearly described. Of the existing shortcomings, if it can be called such, I would call the actions of the main character not entirely clear. Not quite realistic. And some cliché with the analogy of cultivating the eastern DAO and its transfer to the European way (the world is certainly magical, your world, but the techniques are very similar to the methods of cultivators of the DAO). And I really liked the novel, it’s interesting to read it, I added it to my library. I look forward to your update and new chapters! I wanted to find out from the author how many chapters he plans to write in this novel and how often is he going to update? Thank you it was very interesting to read!
Monarch of the Darkness
Elesmere
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I plan to write around 3-4 books and per book around 300 chaps. That's what I've planned. About updates, First of all, writing is only my hobby, which is why I will only be uploading around 2 chaps every week after 15k words. It was also the best for me because I can make the quality of the story better, without writing many unnecessary things. I am pursuing the quality, especially emotions contained inside while trying to make it feel realistic(in emotions). One other thing, it was indeed the similar analogy of Chinese cultivation, but I transfer it into European way because I search this kind of story but I didn't find it. Therefore, I try to visualize it from my imagination and write this by myself. Thanks for reviewing!
Oh then it's great! Of course, provided that you do not receive the contract and close your chapters)))
Elesmere:I plan to write around 3-4 books and per book around 300 chaps. That's what I've planned. About updates, First of all, writing is only my hobby, which is why I will only be uploading around 2 chaps every week after 15k words. It was also the best for me because I can make the quality of the story better, without writing many unnecessary things. I am pursuing the quality, especially emotions contained inside while trying to make it feel realistic(in emotions). One other thing, it was indeed the similar analogy of Chinese cultivation, but I transfer it into European way because I search this kind of story but I didn't find it. Therefore, I try to visualize it from my imagination and write this by myself. Thanks for reviewing!