Review Detail of Kurowari_Da421 in The God of Supremacy
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*sigh* I knew it. You call my story a **** but yours were also bad. I admit, the betrayal scene is good. But if you want to make it more sadder than it should've been, you could've read some Fanfic's on Wattpad about betreyals. But instead, you rushed it up. Even though your work is a bit of messy, I'll appreciate to see the MC grow strong(if you wanted to). Not just some op from the start MC. I admit, having assassination experience were good, but can you assassinate someone who's powered levels were shits? But as an author like you, I gave you more stars that you gave me. I feel the struggles of an author, so keep up and read more fanfictions(system one or not) to gain more inspiration. Remember. A story don't start with great power. If then, author/writer's block would stop you and make your work be hated.
The God of Supremacy
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The comments i made were purley my thoughts with no interaction between my brain And my mouth, think before you sowak i gave you my Opinion as soon as i read it in iTs truest form. while I appreciate the rating the reason why i was so biased was based on me writing as a reader nit a fellow artist. Your story may be good however i simply Could not agree with the start as it made me raGe as a reader. however i apPrEciate The effort you gave to gove me a better understanding
*sigh* it's ok, bruh. To be honest, I've been dealing with shits like those for months...it's really common for me now. And for your novel, would you want to put some tragedy on it? Like, hardships struggle? But to be honest, novels and fanfics ain't about just how op the mc is. It's about how the story goes. It's how about how will the MC do it. And for more better shits, I will appreciate this fanfic if you PUT some realistic things on it. Like, how would YOU react in such even when you're Useless from an op enemy?..