Review Detail of maganam in Somewhat Normal or Not In Marvel

So far so good. Author was absent for few months because of problems with health, now he is back and kicking and ready for more action. My only complain about the novel so far is grammar etc. Well, we have few things on the table like; frequent lack of commas all over the place and dots in few places (mainly dialogues). It makes reading not really hard but rather confusing. Few grammar errors, few mistakes with wrongly used words like "she leaned on his shoulder with contempt" when the sentence clearly indicates that the word "content" should be used. Sometimes sentences are weirdly constructed. As a person whose English is a second language, my main problem was mainly with dialogues. Lack of commas makes reading them pretty damn hard. I found myself backtracking a few time to read them again just check if understood them correctly. And yes, this novel will have a harem in the future. Only 3 girls author said, but we will see in the future. I don't care about harems just for the love of God and all that is holy, don't stop developing love interests characters because we have to many harem novels where girls are like 2d characters without any depth to them and in front of the MC acts like cats in heat. Not even mentioning about changing canon characters mentality and believes on a whim just to suit the story or MC taste. For now we don't have this problem, just bitching about this topic because a lot of novels with harems go this route So after all my bitching, all in all I give this novel solid 9/10 or 4.8/5 as webnovel suggested.