Review Detail of Daiost_Chan in Somewhat Normal or Not In Marvel

I did enjoy the binge read I did but I am gonna drop this story even after reading up to chapter C17. Why? Because like many self-inserts fanfics on this site the story is being rushed, the plot or in other words the OP-ness doesn't make sense. I am not just talking about his power that will be even more OP in the future, no I am talking about everyone (Important MCU figures) being unnaturally attracted to MC. Like Fury is already interested in him for the AVENGERS initiative... like why? All he has done is be a hacker(skill from other life) and kill some thugs at the time.(''secretly'') Then there is Jean Gray, Peter Parker, Fantastic 4, Xavier, Natasha, Magneto, Ancient One... all this in less than 20 chapters. The grammatical mistakes and the way its written although not the worst or anywhere close to it, doesn't help the story. But the worst issue is the rush aspect to the story, everything else can be ignore if not for that issue. This review is not meant as a story bash but to inform the readers and author. Sooner or later you gonna hit the ''rewrite or abandon'' wall. Thanks for the content.