Don’t mean to be rude there is just a few small grammar mistakes that’s all I like the story overall I would like it if you keep on making more chapters as I like the way it’s headed
KillingSoftly
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LIKEAuthor if u dont know how to write harem pls dont write it , just go for one girl. Like dont make his girls lesbien there are too much fun fic in mcu with lesbiens. Im not against les or bis but if you have harem you have to one who in charge ,you are the lord.Some fics are so idiotic they dont even know they cockblood themselvs like some lesbien is coming his harem only for his girls not for the mc and she is having her way with his girls.
KillingSoftly:I will try to fix those more as I go along, honestly I didn’t edit much when I made these
KillingSoftly:I will try to fix those more as I go along, honestly I didn’t edit much when I made these