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Foxy_Shooter
Foxy_ShooterLv113yrFoxy_Shooter

Don’t mean to be rude there is just a few small grammar mistakes that’s all I like the story overall I would like it if you keep on making more chapters as I like the way it’s headed

altalt

Somewhat Normal or Not In Marvel

KillingSoftly

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Foxy_Shooter
Foxy_ShooterLv11Foxy_Shooter

Also please no harem but if you choose to do it I will still read it just hoping.

KillingSoftly
KillingSoftlyAuthorKillingSoftly

I will try to fix those more as I go along, honestly I didn’t edit much when I made these

Obsideon
ObsideonLv4Obsideon

Author if u dont know how to write harem pls dont write it , just go for one girl. Like dont make his girls lesbien there are too much fun fic in mcu with lesbiens. Im not against les or bis but if you have harem you have to one who in charge ,you are the lord.Some fics are so idiotic they dont even know they cockblood themselvs like some lesbien is coming his harem only for his girls not for the mc and she is having her way with his girls.

KillingSoftly:I will try to fix those more as I go along, honestly I didn’t edit much when I made these
Foxy_Shooter
Foxy_ShooterLv11Foxy_Shooter

Thank you dear sir and happy days to you.

KillingSoftly:I will try to fix those more as I go along, honestly I didn’t edit much when I made these
Wallker
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Lol if a 5 star review is rude then I fear what a lower star review is like coming from you.