Review Detail of Lightazen in The Badass Itachi Uchiha in Fairy Tail
Review detail
First off, this is a story about the badassery of Itachi, if you're looking for a serious story then this is not for you. Next up, is the grammar, it is actually pretty good. This makes the story easy to understand. Next is the story, so far MC is still following the canon but we have brainstormed ideas in the discord server about how to make an original story arc. If you got some ideas, do join the server. All in all, this is a very entertaining read. Do read it with entertainment in mind instead of being serious about it and trying to find plot holes here and there. If you do read it for fun tho, this story will certainly intrigue you.
The Badass Itachi Uchiha in Fairy Tail
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READERAkuma:idk what youre f reading to say that the grammar is good, i've read the first chapter and the grammar is ****, is the grammar getting better in further chapters, or is it the same?
It’s “ going to get” not getting and rather than “ is it” you should have written “ or it will be/stay the same ?”. You use the present when you talking about the future....
READERAkuma:idk what youre f reading to say that the grammar is good, i've read the first chapter and the grammar is ****, is the grammar getting better in further chapters, or is it the same?
no... actually, those aren't grammatically wrong. is it still right since he asks about present. and if you asked "or it will be/stay the same?" it is typo (it's not question) since it should be "will it be/still the same?" and it's still not correct. two wrongs don't make things right.
Azroth5:It’s “ going to get” not getting and rather than “ is it” you should have written “ or it will be/stay the same ?”. You use the present when you talking about the future....
Azroth5:It’s “ going to get” not getting and rather than “ is it” you should have written “ or it will be/stay the same ?”. You use the present when you talking about the future....
Lightazen:No, it is good. At the very least, it is good when compared to yours.
Lightazen:Levels doesn't give you superiority. Flaunting your level just makes you look like a child.
EroJaki:no... actually, those aren't grammatically wrong. is it still right since he asks about present. and if you asked "or it will be/stay the same?" it is typo (it's not question) since it should be "will it be/still the same?" and it's still not correct. two wrongs don't make things right.
though, he said that when he read chapter one while there are many others. he can also asks about the past (did it get better) since those are already posted but he didn't read them, so why would he ask about unreleased chapters. sometimes, grammar isn't wrong, but help you better to understand the other's view.
Azroth5:He isn’t asking about present, he is asking if in the next chapters it will get better.
Lightazen:Why would I be jealous about a feature that has almost no benefits to the user?
