Review Detail of Lord_Lou in One Piece Bounty Wars
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14 chap in. 1.Author make 1 paragraph extremely long so it's not really pleasing to read. 2.Mc is a self-centered guy that thinks that only his justice is right. I feel frustrated reading this to be honest but I hope it get better along the way so I might change the review. 3. He kill God buggy TT
One Piece Bounty Wars
GrimsReaper
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I give it more try then. not gonna lie the first few chapters was really well done but it's just the mc personality that triggers a lot of people including me and I actually think your idea is really creative
GrimsReaper:I changed the paragraph spacing on chapter 25. I think it gets better, but thats just my opinion.
Im not gonna lie, there is a lot of things ive seen that i wished i hadn’t put in there, but that was my first time writing something, and i did it on a whim. I have been getting better, but like i said, its just something to mess around with. I know people have their own opinions, and i respect that, and i like the comments, good and bad. lets me know what to work on and change in the future.
Lord_Lou:I give it more try then. not gonna lie the first few chapters was really well done but it's just the mc personality that triggers a lot of people including me and I actually think your idea is really creative