Honest review. This has a good plot but there are still writing mistakes. -Grammar, though grammar mistakes and typos are common mistakes in any book, always reread your chapter before posting. -Punctuation marks, these are what gives drama to reading. It would give the readers a better view of how the sentences are said by the characters, thus making them understand the feelings more. Learn when to use question marks, periods, exclamation points and commas. -Capital letter, always start a sentence with Capital letters so as to refrain readers from reading straight and toneless. I hope you continue this and not drop it. I enjoyed it.[img=recommend]
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