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2020-07-28 07:43

I will justify the stars i give: Writing quality 5/5: No mistakes at all so far Stability of updates 2/5: To early to judge if this story is ditched Story development 1/5: There is no story Character design 5/5: He don't give a single **** World background 3/5: Seems to be copied and pasted from some other story In summary: Not a single person gives a single **** in this story, be it MC, the god, the author or you the reader 10/10 I love it

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Number1Fan
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Good start but it will be better if the chapters are a little longer.....................................................................................................................................

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luckisallmine
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Reveal spoiler

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Weirdo
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Will this be updated or stop for now to leave space for the itachi one? I like xianxia novel but it's hard to find it's fanfic... Hope you can continue this and make a good fanfic...

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