Review Detail of dale97 in POKEMON:SECRETS OF AURA
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I was reluctant at first since you used ash as mc but I'm glad I am reading this since it is by far the best pokemon fanfic I have found. I have read a few that either got dropped or story gets ruined after a certain point. I do hope ash has a harem and that jane and Sarah are included and maybe add few others and since arceus is female so I think she will be added anyway đ€ I cant wait for more chapters
POKEMON:SECRETS OF AURA
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First of all man....I sincerely thank you.....really I am grateful......đ€©..... Well I am having trouble thinking what to do.....really I like harem fics....really do but i like the wons with a nice plot and sincere love and affection between the characters....i dont like the one where the mc just collects all the females........... in my opinion...I three partners will be sufficient...... HERE is my dilemma......this story already focuses on pure love..... The love between Elena And Ash is just too pure..... I really want to add Saran and Jane....Them only no otherss because ...well sister pair is always amazing and as loving sisters there won't be much jealousy or anything between them.............bug for now I will continue to stick with the plot...maybe in the future it may change........well you guys can always use Your imagination to think đ
In my opinion . I'd say it is not good giving a harem of sisters. or any harem. It just feels bad for Elena . After all she and ash did together and even connected their lives to each other . She has to share him with her sisters. It plainly feels extremely bad for her. In my opinion why don't you go with the true love and fated one concept only with no-harem.Please it just feels like it will ruin this great plot by giving him more than one girl.By the way I really really love this novel till now. Thank you and will be expecting more chaptersâș.
Abinav_KR:In my opinion . I'd say it is not good giving a harem of sisters. or any harem. It just feels bad for Elena . After all she and ash did together and even connected their lives to each other . She has to share him with her sisters. It plainly feels extremely bad for her. In my opinion why don't you go with the true love and fated one concept only with no-harem.Please it just feels like it will ruin this great plot by giving him more than one girl.By the way I really really love this novel till now. Thank you and will be expecting more chaptersâș.
