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yo why is no one giving power stones this is a really good story and i don't even like bug types. author-san can you make a psychic version of this when you are finished with this one i would really like to see where you take that🥰

NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 AND ALSO REQUEST THE AUTHOR NOT TO DROP IT COZ ITS REALLY GOOD🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

This is an awesome story...where he focuses on the pokemon better then others...i hope you keep it up...and if there are negative people dont let it get to you

This a great story which only problem is it’s Translation other than that it’s a great read if you can get over this I believe as long as you don’t come in with high expectations of the translations you will be fine

The story has a lot of promise but the author made him powerful to fast and for no solid reason , because the mc started at 7 he should have trained for the 3 years to reach the level he was at chapter 12 and build up from there because he know now what to do and has his pokemon to help him. I know that bug type grow faster but he could have use the time to develop the bond of the mc and his pokemon instead of make so he hatch them they are 100 loyal also we dont know anything about them apart they can take on a dragonite and are more powerful than normal for the short time he trained them . And he keeps finding pokemon that are stronger than average and shinys, he could have good luck and find/hatch a shiny but dont exaggerate it, even Ash the only good quality he has is godly luck only caught one shiny. The writing is done by google translation , a way to better put it is to make less walls of text when he explaining things to improve and maybe also put smaller sentences in the translator to make it feel more natural. He updates regularly so thats nice i dont know how long it will last but if he can make a updates every 2-3 days it will be a nice. And for the world because of the the way he puts the writing it can feel to much at times if you dont very well pokemon but he has a somewhat nice systems to become trainer. I hope this helps in improving your writing and the story. When i wrote this i read till chapter 13 i may comeback to edit

🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏Please keep updating and don't drop this fan fic..... I will vote u daily with power stones................I have read many fan fic with good story but their authors can't take in a little bit of criticism from haters and eventually drop or try rewrite their novel and ruining the essence of their stories....

This book is amazing, it’s really interesting to see how mc explored the bug type, Very refreshing. Keep it up author. the English translation could be a bit better and the chapters longer other then that great work.

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Honestly, this fanfic is very good. The plot was well thought out. The main character and his pokemons' development are amazing. The explanations about the pokemons' mutation are reasonable and interesting. This is the best fanfic about pokemon i've ever read. No harem, op mc within reason and good plot development. This is actually my third time posting a review and actually my longest one. This fanfic is really enjoyable and interesting. More chapters pa po!!!!!!!!!!!!!