Review Detail of NatureBug_Lambert in Wise Soul's Rebirth

Hey guys so I'm sorry about the first 20 chapters there are a lot of grammatical errors or some made up words added, and at the moment I'm having technical difficulties and again I'm so sorry for this but thanks for the support it means a lot to me so if you have any comments or suggestions feel free to send them, oh and lastly this is my first time writing a novel so thanks guys for supporting me