Review Detail of SeveranceCode in High tiers

It’s ok, pretty good start! Chapters are short (I understand, writing is hard) but maybe you could combine chapters together and just do that. The writing quality. Ma’am, I am not trying to offend you in any way but I think that you should proofread before you post it. It has many grammatical errors, and I recommend you get a friend to read it to make sure that there aren’t any mistakes in it. I will update this review to a better rating if the chapters are longer (or put together) and the quality improves. Keep up the good work! :)