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This has been on my RL for a while and now I'll finally drop my initial review for it! Writing - Author has a clear grasp of grammar and the flow of the words from the story's narration gives you a really pleasant reading experience. There we're few errors but they're hardly noticeable, especially when you get to enjoy the seemingly smooth transitions of each chapter. Stability - keep up the updates! Development - After getting past the first few chapters, there's no going back. One can really be invested in stories such as this because who does not get curious about supernatural beings? Surely, this can bait anyone who's into that stuff. Characters - sold! Solid ensemble! They feel alive and kicking. Its a delight to read their dialogues too. MC makes me jealous lol. World - as I said, who doesn't want to expire a world filled with supernaturals? Great building and a really vivid imagery 👏👏👏 Read this everyone!

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THE SHE-DEVIL AND HER ALPHAS

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mssuigeneris
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Were* Explore* loool I got excited I had typos

Glimmy
GlimmyAuthorGlimmy

Thank you so much , really appreciate it I'll do the editing when I get enough time And I'm a fantasy lover . why limit ourselves , we can go lots of places with just our imagination

Glimmy
GlimmyAuthorGlimmy

No problem dear

mssuigeneris:Were* Explore* loool I got excited I had typos