Review Detail of LinShui in Saving the world together

The story has an interesting premise. The first chapter jumps right into the new queen ascending the 'throne' which forces the current King of the inn to pass on his 'crown' to one of his sons. Until chapter 7, the background is still hidden behind veils for the reader, which keeps me reading forward to find out what really is going on between the King and the Queen and for what reason should they not interact? I personally liked the idea for this novel very much, so kudos for that, it is very intriguing. I have a soft spot for anything that involves spirits and helping them find peace. :) I will also point out now a couple of things that I hope will help the author improve, since the story itself is very interesting and has a lot of potential. Description: The story by itself currently is very fast paced and easy to read, but with a little bit more description of the setting, the characters and the backdrop, the story will be more vivid for the reader and also pull the reader in deeper into the story. Grammar: Grammar itself is good, but the story will benefit from a proofread and a little editing from the author. To sum it up: The story and its premise are good, I believe it is rather unique and I'm interested in where this story will take us. The story would be perfect if a little more description is added to smooth out the flow between character interactions and scene-changes. Keep writing author, you are doing good! The story is very promising! :)