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Review Detail of KCChakry in The Vulgar Mortal [BL]

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KCChakry
KCChakryLv103yrKCChakry

Firstly, the writing quality is top notch, flawless even. And the narrative is simple, straight, and equal parts humorous that really makes it fun to read. Secondly, the characters are very entertaining with each their own mentailities and complimenting others at the same time. The banter between the brothers MingYu, ZhiYi and PingZe, and the ever fainting XiaoHe, and even the Contemptible Donkey and the too-cool-to-talk Myna bird. They are all intersting and entertaining in their own way. Next,The pacing is perfect with particular focus on describing the main things and keeping the reader scrolling down eagerly as we discover bits and pieces of the world and the everything that's going on around. Thats brings me to world background, which is done exceptionally well, revealing things slowly and carefully. The lore of the world, the puzzles and mysteries about the Gods, missions, punishments are all pretty damn cool. Honestly, its sad that not many are reading it as this is one solid 5 star novel right here. This is more than just a BL novel and everyone should atleast give it a try before judging it. I'll be looking forward to following MingYu and his brothers on his journey and uncover some secrets and solve some mysteries.

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The Vulgar Mortal [BL]

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LinShui
LinShuiAuthorLinShui

Thank you so much for the review. I don’t know what to say, I’m just so glad you liked the story and thank you for the compliments!😳❤️

KCChakry
KCChakryLv10KCChakry

You, your writing, your story and XiaoHe especially deserve it. Hehe

LinShui:Thank you so much for the review. I don’t know what to say, I’m just so glad you liked the story and thank you for the compliments!😳❤️