Writing quality: 4/5 Good enough. Grammatical errors here and there but otherwise, not bad. Update stability: 5/5 Story developement: 3/5 Wish fulfilment novel. Nothing else to say. Character development/design: 1/5 OP from the start. Acting like a “innocent kid” who hasnt seen the opposite *** in his entire life. Since this is a wish fulfilment novel, the character is rather bland and 1 dimensional. No emotions whatsoever. Just handles any situation pretty quickly and boringly because he is OP. World background: 4/5 Havent read much so i don’t know about the future development but i cannot continue reading because the MC is distasteful. I will give the benefit of doubt and rate 4/5 for this section.
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