Review Detail of Aschirg in "Peaceful" Life in a Different World
Review detail
Well, to best describe this story would be to simply call it shallow. The writing quality is ok, no horrible grammar, although the writing is rather simple. Updates are ok. Character Design could not possibly be any more simple and shallow and gets a big minus.World backround is also not well done. Story development is where it gets really strange, things just kinda jum ahead of themselves. There is no natural flow. Something is mentioned and boom it happens, not giving a shit about logic. Why this story has such a high rating I cant possibly fathom. It is by far not the worst and has decent enough gramar but characters are shallow and the story develops in weird jumpy ways. I am rating this work as below 3.
"Peaceful" Life in a Different World
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it’s rated higher than it should be because most of the people who actually stay and keep reading on this website have the mental maturity of a 2nd grader and fail to understand things like character development or humor or world development and all you really have to do is string things together so they sound interesting like “he see valcano, valcano go boom, he run fast and near die!”
Unfortunate truth of this platform. Honestly, even reviews I have seen in this platform are the worst I have seen. More than 50% seem to bee bashing author, repeating sentence/word, asking author something etc... And comments are toxic af overall.
Unknown_Variable:it’s rated higher than it should be because most of the people who actually stay and keep reading on this website have the mental maturity of a 2nd grader and fail to understand things like character development or humor or world development and all you really have to do is string things together so they sound interesting like “he see valcano, valcano go boom, he run fast and near die!”