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2020-07-27 00:33

I like Shusui, he was one of the best characters in Naruto. Seeing him being in a protagonist in his own book is good. This book seems promising and i would like to read more of it. I'd like to author to increase the release without making worse the story, I know everybody like to read more of the stories that they like, but I really like to have more.

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Another great DXD FF...probably one of the handful thats decent, English, grammar and structure is dope MC is shisui as an SI in DXD in OG pillar. And theres no rush, author spends time showing development, like 15 chps and we are still in childhood, yah..author wants to show development, nice..do continue. better than other **** where MC is fking in 3 paragraphs. I will say that MC seems a tiny bit OC, but I suppose this is to be expected cause MC did die and reincarnate and as a result is kinda a new entity, so its fine. The OC characters past is something that would interesting to know. As for MC power, I dont really know, its OP in paper,,,but it has no pazzaz [ meaning its related to teleportation, its OP yes but no pazzaz like giant energy mechs and puppets and ****- then again author might change],,,but from the way I see it I think u need brains to so its really interesting, plus its perfect for shisui. Suggestion: OP MC, atleast well beyond everyone in his generation, I mean dude is a reincarnate. Make him smart, ruthless, and calculative and secretive [hide power---really do this cause he ninja, now yes, him being a devil and as result his sin might prevent but fk it,,,he a ninja first,,,so yah]...also plan, he was a commander. Any relationships build and take it slow. Also travel world, like go to china, Ireland , Africa [some country],,, Powers: Illusions related , Fire related , Time related, Erasure related **: And yes, i know, I didnt give 5 star despite this deserving it more than anything, and well its cause I despise when MC goes after moms or wives,,so yah,,,but bk was too good to pass..so yah. I;d give 4.9 but I dont know how

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