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it's a good story, but too often do missions between dimensions even though he just finished it and this story becomes less focused in the original mc world, if you can place the story between the mission story and the story in the original mc world is 5:5 which will make the story balanced because many readers may be bored to see mc doing missions continuously and want to see mc development in the real world.... and also mc looks pretty naive as he seems to easily make a contract with steam for his game issue placing his distribution rights to steam... ah and also if possible when the story takes place in the original world mc should look more original / natural without any magical elements, also don't let mc do things that don't make sense like make games without making the company and steam company management not question how he can make the game itself without the help of the team/company which is very unreasonable... the author should make the story more realistic like if mc wants to make a game he has to make a company and so on.... like the novel "recarnation in America that will start to make company from scratch