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Its not bad, but I cant feel any complex emotions from any of the characters, and a few things really stand out that the author doesn't really understand, and tries to be as vague as possible, lest he end up with stuff like brain speed being equatible to comprehension. Its not the worst novel in the world, and frankly the idea of someone gaining access to a near unlimited store of advanced knowledge drip fed is quite interesting, but unfortunately for me at least the author is going to need more expierience writing, defining his own style and understanding what he wants out of his characters before it becomes truly compelling. A solid 3 for me.

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thanks for your advice. I am learning as i write. You will see improvements as you go on