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Author here, im giving the story 5 starts because i have big hopes for it. I am writing it as my take on mister A popping out of nowhere in a situation he does not understand and trying to get by. I am open to sugestions and criticism just try to make it coherent please. Have a good read.
Applying Logic to the Unknown
MrRereader
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Alright, I just wrote a couple of chapters so I'm nice and fresh, lets see. There is magic and it plays a major part in the story, he is able to use magic and I have plans to improve the magical lore as time goes on. As for the conning people and abusing the superpowers by using modern knowledge to his advantage. As of yet, no superpower has been introduced because the MC has nothing to do with them I'm talking as of chapter 60, still unreleased. Will he con people, yes, will he be a businessman of sorts yes, cause it's the easiest way to make a living. But as for will he use some sort of extreme abstract future knowledge called google to progress, that is a no. What the MC will abuse is the obsession people have with tradition, as you may know, traditional people only do things one way, the way tradition dictates. So he won't suddenly figure out how to make cars and go on his merry way, he will look at their traditions, call them stupid, and do things his own way which may not be ideal, because he is not perfect and the readers will probably be able to figure out ways to do it even better. So he won't have plot armor at least not an awfully obvious one just the ''You have to advance the plot'' type. He is not op as of right now, but he will probably become somewhat op in the future, depends on how things go. Hope this made sense.
Dechet:I was irresolute about reading the story so I read in diagonal a bit and what we (=I) would have liked to know (I will delete this comment if you so wish me to just tell me) is that he will be a business man that magic does exist but will come later. that he isn't OP and have street knowledge and scam as super power (and exploit the glaring fault of the system there (which is for me part of the plot armor)) so yeah I will read it maybe later.
The chopper drawing is quite well done, but you prologue is not really informative, like does he use magic (how does the magic system work), what do you mean with the title, does he become a monster hunter Etc. and it would help the audience to know or at least point the direction your book is gonna take.
First thing first thanks for the comment. As for what you're saying I think you are correct, I could explain things better, I will try to do so in the future, but I won't change the already existing chapters. As for the ambiguity of it all, it is due to the story being written in the first person mostly, so if the MC does not know about something it won't be written, even if the Author does know. Then about the magic system, it is explained further into the story, in the first chapters I believe. Then will he be a monster hunter?. Well, you know, stuff happens, and it will be a secondary objective. And as for the title, I think it's self-explanatory, you apply logic to the unknown, MC will run into things he does not know about, he will get NO PLOT ARMOUR FROM ME, cause I'm a jerk like that, and hell deal with it logically. Anyway, have a nice day my man, hope you stick around.
Dechet:The chopper drawing is quite well done, but you prologue is not really informative, like does he use magic (how does the magic system work), what do you mean with the title, does he become a monster hunter Etc. and it would help the audience to know or at least point the direction your book is gonna take.
I was irresolute about reading the story so I read in diagonal a bit and what we (=I) would have liked to know (I will delete this comment if you so wish me to just tell me) is that he will be a business man that magic does exist but will come later. that he isn't OP and have street knowledge and scam as super power (and exploit the glaring fault of the system there (which is for me part of the plot armor)) so yeah I will read it maybe later.
MrRereader:First thing first thanks for the comment. As for what you're saying I think you are correct, I could explain things better, I will try to do so in the future, but I won't change the already existing chapters. As for the ambiguity of it all, it is due to the story being written in the first person mostly, so if the MC does not know about something it won't be written, even if the Author does know. Then about the magic system, it is explained further into the story, in the first chapters I believe. Then will he be a monster hunter?. Well, you know, stuff happens, and it will be a secondary objective. And as for the title, I think it's self-explanatory, you apply logic to the unknown, MC will run into things he does not know about, he will get NO PLOT ARMOUR FROM ME, cause I'm a jerk like that, and hell deal with it logically. Anyway, have a nice day my man, hope you stick around.