Its quite good the start and all but the harem is too force they all wanna sleep with him even after just hearing about him if ure expecting some kind of romance there is none they just f*ck and they’re already together
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LIKEInreaooy wish they put just a littoe thiught into there book when writing like i dint mind if he has *** with nuktiple women but they all dont have to end up with him and it feels like they oush that into the plot if they just mentioned they slept together and see each ither every now and then it would be fine but harems where the girls instantly fall for mc are so ugly to even look at. if you wabt something good to read try Divinity: against the godly system
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A harem in my definition is the Mc has multiple womwn who are around him and they actually get together and show that they like and love each other. instead of the mc buying “slaves” to help him get stronger for “revenge” and doesnt pay attention to the girls or thinks of them as tools for revenge and to make his life easier instead of a actual harem where they all love each other and the mc isnt a rock that doesnt know when to take hints. lol
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