this got high ratings so i tried it. pretty good concept, but why do you have info dumps in every chapter? first 12 chapters and what do we got? yes you keep saying that you're a beginner writer BUT you could've learned from your predecessors right? chapters are short. At the end of some chapters you said they're a long one, but that's just because of the info dumps. dang there's even a chapter where he only change clothes and inform us his favorite color which is red and black . and don't you try delete this review . already skimmed those chapters up to 60+ but still, can't really bring myself to read this one. anyways, nice try and learn more.
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LIKEnone so far, aside from some body strengthening that is due to the apocalypse viruses. If talents are included then, he do gained some talent from the system.
cameron_scears:hey Neil nice novel BTW I wanted to ask i just started reading will there be powers the mc can get from the system
ParagonBonemancer:I'm not being aggressive. I'm just being frank and it's your improvement which can be the cure
hey Neil nice novel BTW I wanted to ask i just started reading will there be powers the mc can get from the system
Neil_Ads:why should I delete this review? you can literally see on the review section that I don't delete reviews, aside from spam of course. If that's what you think about my novel then so be it. You're pretty aggressive, sorry, I don't have any cure for that.
Neil_Ads:none so far, aside from some body strengthening that is due to the apocalypse viruses. If talents are included then, he do gained some talent from the system.