Review Detail of ParagonBonemancer in Into the Zombie World
Review detail
this got high ratings so i tried it. pretty good concept, but why do you have info dumps in every chapter? first 12 chapters and what do we got? yes you keep saying that you're a beginner writer BUT you could've learned from your predecessors right? chapters are short. At the end of some chapters you said they're a long one, but that's just because of the info dumps. dang there's even a chapter where he only change clothes and inform us his favorite color which is red and black . and don't you try delete this review . already skimmed those chapters up to 60+ but still, can't really bring myself to read this one. anyways, nice try and learn more.
Into the Zombie World
Neil_Ads
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ParagonBonemancer:I'm not being aggressive. I'm just being frank and it's your improvement which can be the cure
hey Neil nice novel BTW I wanted to ask i just started reading will there be powers the mc can get from the system
Neil_Ads:why should I delete this review? you can literally see on the review section that I don't delete reviews, aside from spam of course. If that's what you think about my novel then so be it. You're pretty aggressive, sorry, I don't have any cure for that.
none so far, aside from some body strengthening that is due to the apocalypse viruses. If talents are included then, he do gained some talent from the system.
cameron_scears:hey Neil nice novel BTW I wanted to ask i just started reading will there be powers the mc can get from the system
Neil_Ads:none so far, aside from some body strengthening that is due to the apocalypse viruses. If talents are included then, he do gained some talent from the system.