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yaykisspurr
yaykisspurrLv53yryaykisspurr

I really like the creativity involved in creating the character, world and background. The English is horrid though and sometimes it pulls me out of the story. The fight scenes are getting better and better. I really like Maximo and the animal development.

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Into the Zombie World

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Neil_Ads
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hehehe sorry about my english. But don't worry, already have an editor. But due to his other work, maybe he would only start editing on next week's chaps.

yaykisspurr
yaykisspurrLv5yaykisspurr

I read up to the locked chapters. I won’t continue because the reading experience isnt smooth enough.

yaykisspurr
yaykisspurrLv5yaykisspurr

Youre very very creative! Keep it up! 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻

Neil_Ads:hehehe sorry about my english. But don't worry, already have an editor. But due to his other work, maybe he would only start editing on next week's chaps.