it is a good take on the xianxia genre, the starting is slow and alot of things repetitive but its still good for a mimic 1111111111111111111111111111111111
koladeizdavid
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LIKEThanks so much for the honest review. Glad u reached out to comment. I really appreciate it. At least, I now know what am doing wrong. But pardon me, I still can't figure out the things I repeated in my story as I always try to put only new stuffs in there. Could u please share me some examples so I could avoid it. I want to make the novel better. XD I anticipate your reply. Thanks again for the review. I seriously appreciate it. 👍 💯 Do have a nice time out there. Bless you. 🙏
the way your storyline flows is the same 1.dead parents 2.unrealistic powers thay your character has not saying that its bad to load up your mc with op powers and if i guess right you want depth to your character but how will he progress when he is given everything just saying you should paint your own picture dont trace the same script that every author follows (check out keviascending and devil paragon;s book you will get what i mean)
koladeizdavid:Thanks so much for the honest review. Glad u reached out to comment. I really appreciate it. At least, I now know what am doing wrong. But pardon me, I still can't figure out the things I repeated in my story as I always try to put only new stuffs in there. Could u please share me some examples so I could avoid it. I want to make the novel better. XD I anticipate your reply. Thanks again for the review. I seriously appreciate it. 👍 💯 Do have a nice time out there. Bless you. 🙏
Oh. Alright. Thanks so much for the reply. I get what you are saying. But I think am doing fine with what am writing. I am not following any other author's method. My style is very different. True he may be overpowered but why he is overpowered is explained well enough. And you said how would he progress when he has everything. My MC doesn't have everything. There are so many things he lacks that he would venture to worlds to get. I am just at chp 98 I think. So my character is just developing. Anyways, thanks for review and reply. I appreciate it. Do have a great time out there. Bless you.
supreme_primordial:the way your storyline flows is the same 1.dead parents 2.unrealistic powers thay your character has not saying that its bad to load up your mc with op powers and if i guess right you want depth to your character but how will he progress when he is given everything just saying you should paint your own picture dont trace the same script that every author follows (check out keviascending and devil paragon;s book you will get what i mean)