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Review Detail of WiLeYBiGhEaD in Wizard King

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WiLeYBiGhEaD
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One of the best fanfics i have ever read. It is an au which may put some people off but i like it a lot despite the occasional inconsistency. There is lots of good character development and the pacing is good(even the filler is interesting and well used to develop the world and its characters). I strongly appreciate how most character choices have some thought put into them(aka the characters arent dumb even if they are more promiscuous than normal, which i also like). Overall, this story is far above average for this site and clicks with me. The author has set the stage for an excellent story and i hope they can maintain the quality of work they have shown. I eagerly await more.

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Ashmodai
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Wich character development??? Meets breathing female. Female: Damn he is so hot pls **** me. Harry: Ok.

Mark_Ward
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thx for the in-depth review!

WiLeYBiGhEaD
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The relationship development is lacking in many cases in favour of smut. I definately want more of it even if it is just an exchange of feelings/promises/or backstory. I.e. None of the characters, Harry included, have ever stated they are in a polygamous or polyamorous relationship! Something that I would like clarified as insinuations are not enough. But i understand why it is limited as the author chose to develop other parts of the story instead(word limits). However, outside of that it is very good for a fanfic. Original (and new) characters are almost always introduced for those who don’t remember, and Harry encounters many developments outside of *** and learning magic. The interactions between him and Sirius are an excellent example of Harry learning about life, family, and how to be a noble. While Sirius adapts to normal life again and being responsible for somone. Yes, it could be better(author please define relationships!!! ’harry, your the only one for me’ or ‘I like you but I don’t want any commitments’) but as this isnt a full novel and it is already very good for the limited amount of words the author has to work with. Its a harem fanfic not a romance novel. If there was more romatic developments and character development for love interests(not just ***), my rating would be almost a full star higher.

Ashmodai:Wich character development??? Meets breathing female. Female: Damn he is so hot pls **** me. Harry: Ok.