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Hyacinth_FS
Hyacinth_FSAuthor4yr
2020-09-24 23:53

Hello! I'm being shameless here self-promoting. The story is about a guy who died in a magical universe. Then got reborn in a non-magical universe on a planet called earth. The twist in the story and main focus is the MC having two controlling two different body having one soul. It's a story about friendship, family, love, action and MC struggling to live controlling two bodies at the same time. This is my first book, I'm not an English speaker and don't have prior experience. So completely a newbie. Also, this story will share multiple universes that will tie in with my other future works I have plans for. Some magical fantasy elements and mentions I'm that will be revealed in the story for the shared multi-verse building. Hope readers like my story and help me improve. I personally think because of my limited grammar and vocab the story feels a bit bad that's my opinion but I will improve as I go. Thank you, for reading. Author-Hyacinth_FS.

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RinCCa
RinCCaLv2

Hello, this might be unrelateable but I want to read your novel but it has brother-sister-bond in it. Is this an ****** story or something. I'm new to this type of stories

Hyacinth_FS
Hyacinth_FSAuthor

No, it doesn't have in**st in it. They are just very close! The are mentally connected with telepathic and empathetic channel. Their relationship is pretty normal. [img=recommend]

RinCCa:Hello, this might be unrelateable but I want to read your novel but it has brother-sister-bond in it. Is this an ****** story or something. I'm new to this type of stories
UndeadBeing
UndeadBeingLv12

ummm there's a manga about this exact situation, are you- are you copying? It's called "After Transformation, Mine And Her Wild Fantasy"

Hyacinth_FS
Hyacinth_FSAuthor

Actually, it's not the exact situation but I got the twin's concept idea from it. But it's different from that novel/manga

UndeadBeing:ummm there's a manga about this exact situation, are you- are you copying? It's called "After Transformation, Mine And Her Wild Fantasy"
UndeadBeing
UndeadBeingLv12

Alright, the only reason I thought that was because the main story of that manga was really dependent on the twin factor of it.

Hyacinth_FS:Actually, it's not the exact situation but I got the twin's concept idea from it. But it's different from that novel/manga
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